Thursday 1 September 2011

An Interlude

Ok, so i missed the week 3 writing challenge. I was supposed to re write a fairy tale from a different point of view but life as usual got in the way. Therefore, while i am working on week 4 (which is almost done) i have decided to post a poem i wrote a little while ago. On noticing that i mostly wrote dark, angst ridden stuff i decided to try something slightly more upbeat and this was the result. I hope you like.



Hidden Beauty

There’s a fairy at the bottom of my garden.
Come close, I’ll take you to see.
But you must promise to whisper
‘Cos she frightens so easily.

There’s a fairy at the bottom of my garden.
Crouch down, one step at a time.
Mind that twig! The loud noise will scare her,
Follow me, that’s right, you’re fine.

There’s a fairy at the bottom of my garden.
Peek gently through these bushy leaves
And glimpse for the first time the beauty
Of a world in which no-one believes.

There’s a fairy at the bottom of my garden.
Can you see her dance and twirl?
Her shimmering skirt flowing round her
Whilst the ferny grass fronds unfurl.

There’s a fairy at the bottom of my garden.
Just listen, do you hear that?
She’s dancing in time to the music
Of the garden in which we are sat.

There’s a fairy at the bottom of your garden.
Take the time, be quiet and you’ll see,
The beauty of all that surrounds you.
That’s yours. A gift, from me.

4 comments:

  1. I'm going to read this to my baby girl... She'll LOVE this!!!!! :D

    It's fab!! :D

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  2. I absolutely love this (I wish I had a garden, so I could visit fairies) It's brill Anita :) x

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  3. I especially like this one, Anita. Well done.

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